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Falling for an eternity, you caught me at forever [just another vampire romance gone wrong]

Darkness was falling. The little whore walking around the streets was starting to get worried. How was it that no one was out tonight? She needed her fix quite terrible, but yet no one was coming to get her services. *sigh* Fine I guess I’m stuck with giving that lowlife of a dealer head for just a quick fix… “Why hello Candy.” The girl straightened up. No one knew her name unless she’d done something for them, and even then., she didn’t really enjoy giving it out in case they came to find her. It may just be a “stripper name” as Jamie always said, but still. “Oh come now, Candy, why aren’t you responding? Any other guy, and you’d be all over him in a heartbeat. I know you want your fix, and you need the money.” “So what if I do? When are you going to get that what happened a few months ago was just another… business chore? There was no hidden deal in there! And don’t tell me that… doing a vampire is another type of induction thingy, I’m not stupid.” “I never called you that, and I never said that ‘doing me’ was a way of getting into the clan. But… I’m sorry to say this, but it happens that my highers saw your amazing… performance and want you there to be a slave. Personally, I liked the afterward talking with you over the actual sex, so I’m going to strike a bargain with you. Vampires have this weird thing for liking human slaves, so…” “You’re saying that to stop me from becoming a sex slave to vampires over humans, I have to become one, I don’t see a point. Either way, I’m still giving up stuff that I shouldn’t be doing. And what’s so different about be a vampire’s slave over many a human?” “They don’t just need sex, you silly girl. They use you for a night, then they put you to work in there house, to let them drink from you whenever needed, force you to entertain guest at their wanting. Do you really want that type of life?” After he said this, he noticed the tear running down her face. “Jeremy, do you really think that it would make much of a difference? At least I’d have a certain place to live, I’d probably become friends with the other girls stuck in the house, and hey… maybe I’d die before anything truly happened to me. That scenario sounds a lot better than being stuck in this hell hole.” “What about Jamie? Isn’t she worth living for?” “Don’t bring my sister into this. The only thing she’s got going for her by staying with me is getting into this shit just like I did. It’s not fair that our mom kicked us both out and now she’s stuck with me. Don’t tell me she’d be better off with me living, cause we both know she wouldn’t.” “Sarah, please. I don’t want to see you stuck where they want to send you. If they knew I was doing this, they’d probably kill me, so please. Just let me turn you. We can turn her, too. It doesn’t matter! I just don’t want to see you doing that, and Jamie doesn’t need you to just disappear like what would be happening. She doesn’t have a mom anymore, only you. Please?” “It almost sounds like your doing this for her sake. What’s up with that?” “I’ve been watching you two, and Jamie seems like a sweet kid, that’s all.” “Ah, so you’ve started to fancy her, eh?” “No! I’m just watching over… She’s just like the little sister of a colleague that’s just…” “Really pretty and sweet?” “… Yeah…” “I don’t want my sister to fall for a vampire. It’s just not healthy. She’ll want to turn or something, and she shouldn’t do that for a boy. Especially one that…” “One that what?” “Has been given my services. I don’t want her to feel obligated to compete with me for affection by giving her self up. It’s just not needed, ok?” “Fine… but please just think about my offer. You know how to reach me…” And with that he was gone.